Christmas around the World and at Home

 

Ben's Great Sentences

In writing I have been working on descriptive writing... here are five of my best sentences:

Do you have any ideas to improve my writing?

My Burger Bun

 

Blessed are the poor in spirit, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.

Blessed are they who mourn,for they will be comforted.

Blessed are the meek, for they will inherit the land.

Blessed are they who hunger and thirst for righteousness,for they will be satisfied.

Blessed are the merciful, for they will be shown mercy.

Blessed are the clean in heart, for they will see God.

Blessed are the peacemakers,for they will be called children of God.

Blessed are they who are persecuted for the sake of righteousness,for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.

Portal

 There was once a person who built a really big boat. In the boat, he put one animal of every kind. then he went aboard and set sail. When the boat was at sea, they were there for days. On one of those days, there was a terrible storm. the boat sank, but all of the animals had enough breath to see a portal and go through it. 

In the portal, it was pitch-black but the person could sense that the animals were with him. If they were under sea or not, they could breathe. At the end of the portal, it was still the sea, but with many differences. First of all, they could breathe, (which is unusual in a sea) and there was not stuff you would expect in one. It was more like the sky, but there weren't birds and clouds, but there was evaporated water (which is also unusual) and when they finally stopped exploring, they finally found land and none of the animals were killed, so they went to the zoo and a person lent the person that built the boat his house and then he went away to build another one for himself. The person who built the boat and the animals were apart but they still remembered each other.

After their adventure, lots of people looked for the portal, but they did not find it so the talk about it died down and the only people that remembered it were the animals and the person. After they recovered, they found the portal and had another adventure.But NOW they were ready. they brought lots of food and they went and had a picnic and then they went back and they remembered each other for the rest of their lives.

THE END

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